Analyse Structure < Korrekturlesen < Englisch < Sprachen < Vorhilfe
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Analyse nach diesen Punkten:
Introduction
Action
Rising Action
Climax
Falling action
Turning point
Deneonement
Habe vorher einen andren Theard gestartet da ich nicht weiss /wusste wie man soetwas macht hier der link zum nachlesen
https://matheraum.de/read?i=534218
Bitte auch grammatikfehler anstreichen etc.
In the Introduction, the reader gets some informations about the characters and the setting. It is a poor family with 15 years old Boy, his name is Billy, the reader doesnt finds out the exact name from the other characters.
The reader gets some informations about their look e.g. the woman dress or the fathers moustache. Despite of the familys poverty the family is very clean. The story takes place in the living-dining room for example a armchair and a table is mentioned.
The author builds a tense atmosphere, he describes a lot of details e.g. the man ignored his wife. Another reason for the suspense is the son, they are waiting for him because he earns his first weeks wages.
The action of the story makes it clear that the family is very poor. The man and the woman quarrel for the money it gets clear that the man wastes the family money in a public house.
The author increases the tension as the son came in. The situation is very tense because both parents ask the sun for the money and pleased him to give it.
The decision, that the boy has lost the money makes for considerable suspense. The suspense climbs to its climax as the father beat his son with his belt.
Afterwards the suspense begins to fall, because the son must go to bed.
The turning point of the story is, as the mother comes upstairs and her son gives her the envelope with the money, thats the solution to the problem too. Now the father cannot waste the money and the mother can buy some food for the family.
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Anhang Nr. 2 (Typ: jpg) [nicht öffentlich]
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Ok, mir wäre schon weitergeholfen wenn einer korrekturlesen könnte:)?
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig  | | Datum: | 14:20 Sa 11.04.2009 | | Autor: | matux |
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