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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 21:31 Di 10.02.2009 | | Autor: | cheezy |
| Aufgabe | I have played the Game San Andreas for 4 years.
This game take place in Los Santos in the year 1992. In the beginning of the game you are coming home from Liberty City and when you enter the house, nobody is at home. After a few seconds your brother comes downstairs and he wanted to hit you, because he think you are a burglar. Then you say to him: Chill out, Im your brother. Then he told you, that somebody have murdererd your mother. You are very mad and you want to take revenge on those people, who have killed your mom. After a time you receive a lot of orders from people and you must to solve the missions to know who murdered your mother.
In this game you are capable of walking, running,swimming,climbing and jumping. You can also drive a variety of vehicles, including automobiles, boats, airplanes, helicopters, trains, tanks, motorcycles and bikes. When you are hungry, you must visit a restaurant to stay healthy. If you eat nothing, you`ll die.And you can get a driver license, if you pass all exams. I think the most interesting thing in this game is, when you drive with your car, you can listen eleven radio stations.
If you hear WCTR (talk radio), you can improve your English. You can go to the gym and practice your body. There you can free weights and run on the treadmill. If your body is muscular, other people have respect to you. If you have solved many missions, then you must save a girl from a burning house. If you have successful done this, then she ask you to be her friend. Then you can pick her up, and visit with her to a dinner.
I think children can lern in this game many words in English, because in this game are 4200 lines of dialogue spoken in English and you can turn on the german-subtitle.
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Kann mir bitte jemand diesen Text auf Fehler überprüfen?
Nur die Zeiten sind mir wichtig
Rechtschreibung kann ich selber nachschauen danke
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig  | | Datum: | 22:08 Di 10.02.2009 | | Autor: | cheezy |
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Leute bitte helft mir könnt ihr wenigstens nur den ersten satz bei mir korrigieren
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Hallo,
> I have played the Game San Andreas for 4 years.
>
> This game [mm] take\red{s} [/mm] place in Los Santos in the year 1992. In the
> beginning of the game you are coming home from Liberty City
> and when you enter the house, nobody is at home. After a
> few seconds your brother comes downstairs and he [mm] want\red{s} [/mm] to
> hit you, because he [mm] think\red{s} [/mm] you are a burglar. Then you say
> to him: [mm] \red{"}Chill [/mm] out, Im your [mm] brother\red{"}. [/mm] Then he told you, that
> somebody have murdererd your mother. You are very mad and
> you want to take revenge on those people, who have killed
> your mom. After a time you receive a lot of orders from
> people and you must [mm] [s]to[\s] [/mm] solve the missions to know who
> murdered your mother.
>
> In this game you are capable of walking,
> running,swimming,climbing and jumping. You can also drive a
> variety of vehicles, including automobiles, boats,
> airplanes, helicopters, trains, tanks, motorcycles and
> bikes. When you are hungry, you must visit a restaurant to
> stay healthy. If you eat nothing, you'll die.And you can
> get a driver license, if you pass all exams. I think the
> most interesting thing in this game is, when you drive with
> your car, you can listen eleven radio stations.
> If you hear WCTR (talk radio), you can improve your
> english. You can go to the gym and practice your body.
> There you can free weights and run on the [mm] treadmill\red{?} [/mm] Den Satz verstehe ich nicht. If
> your body is muscular, other people have [mm] respect\red{s} [s]to[\s] [/mm] you. If
> you have solved many missions, then you must save a girl
> from a burning house. If you have [mm] successful\red{ly} [/mm] done this,
> then she [mm] ask\red{s} [/mm] you to be her friend. Then you can pick her
> up, and visit with her to a dinner.
>
> I think children can [mm] le\red{a}rn [/mm] in this game many words in
> English, because in this game are 4200 lines of dialogue
> spoken in English and you can turn on the german-subtitle.
>
Zunächst einmal solltest du nicht immer "Then" schreiben. Das macht den Text langweilig. Dein Statemant, dass das Spiel gut für Kinder ist kann ich gar nicht teilen. Viel sinnvoller wäre es wenn man englische Bücher liest oder Fernsehen auf englisch und und und. Die vulgäre Spache in diesem Spiel ist doch nichts für Kinder  ![[meinemeinung]](/images/smileys/meinemeinung.gif "[meinemeinung]")
Achja, keine Garantie auf Richtigkeit und Vollständigkeit 
> Kann mir bitte jemand diesen Text auf Fehler überprüfen?
> Nur die Zeiten sind mir wichtig
>
> Rechtschreibung kann ich selber nachschauen danke
![[hut]](/images/smileys/hut.gif "[hut]") Gruß
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