Correction needed! :// < Korrekturlesen < Englisch < Sprachen < Vorhilfe
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig  | | Datum: | 16:46 So 14.02.2010 | | Autor: | bitte |
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Before the Second World War, most human societies worked in the field of agriculture. Since the 1950s, however, the Industrial Revolution and the increased use of GM methods have led to a loss of the traditional attitude towards farming. The scientific methods of GM, especially make food production faster and easier than ever. Yet, in recent years, the question of the long-term effects of genetic altered food has arisen among many societies. It is obvious that food production in the past of farming industry was far healthier compared to food production in today's farming industry. The past of farming was traditional, whereas the modern way of farming is based on genetic modification, a scientific method to duplicate the genes of one organism to make many copies of that one organism. Food experts warn people of the unhealthy impacts of genetically modified food on the human body. GM has, for example, led to serious diseases, such as BSE among cows. Even though BSE primarily affects cows, BSE can easily transmit to humans too because of the meat that humans eat. As a result, food experts recommend eating organic food. Organic food is healthier and more nutritious because it is natural. Yet, if people keep eating genetically modified food, then, on the long run, they ma be suffering from deficiency symptoms since genetically altered food lacks in nutritional quality. To stay healthy, it is therefore important to eat organic food.
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Can somebody plz check this extract for grammar mistakes/illogical sentences? :[ that'd be so greeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaatttttttt! ://
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig | | Datum: | 17:13 So 14.02.2010 | | Autor: | pythagora |
Ich denke, dass die Frage schon gestelt wurde, ich sehe zumindest keine unterschiede...
LG
pythagora
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Hallo bitte,
bitte keine Doppelposts fabrizieren!
Danke
Gruß
schachuzipus
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