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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 09:36 Di 05.05.2009 | | Autor: | Dinker |
Guten Morgen
In the same way as their fear increase, their attraction to Jack grow.
attraction = Darf ich das nehmen?
In the text passage, when Ralph participates in the bloodthirsty dance, Golding implies that every individual has a prospensity toward instinct and savage, because it is innated in every human being.
With the help of Simon and Jack, Golding shows how different people feels the influences of the instincts of civilization and savagery.
After learning profound truths about human morality, Simon had to died
Vielen Dank
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(Antwort) fertig  | | Datum: | 10:46 Di 05.05.2009 | | Autor: | Arnie09 |
Moin,
> Guten Morgen
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> In the same way as their fear increase, their attraction to
> Jack grow.
> attraction = Darf ich das nehmen?
Jop, es bedeutet ebenfalls Zugkraft und Anziehung, das passt dann  .
Allerdings würde ich den hinteren Satzteil ins passive umstellen:
, they feel more attracted to/by Jack.
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> In the text passage, when Ralph participates the
> bloodthirsty dance, Golding implies that every individual
> has a propensity to instinct and savageness, because it is
> innated in every human being.
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> With the help of Simon and Jack, Golding shows how
> different people feel the influences of the instincts of
> civilization and savagery.
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> After learning profound truths about human morality, Simon
> had to die
Ansonsten müsste es passen. In den letzten drei Sätzen habe ich zwei, drei Buchstaben rausgekürzt.
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> Vielen Dank
Lg,
Arnie
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