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(Frage) überfällig  | | Datum: | 09:57 Do 07.05.2009 | | Autor: | Dinker |
Hello
In a democratic election, Ralph is choiced to the leader
Meanwhile Ralph is build up shelter, Jack prefers to hunt
Roger and Maurice destroy the sandcastle from the littluns
Roger throws stone (to) Henry but without hit him
Jacks first temptation to kill a pig is - Roger and Maurice destroy the sandcastle from the littluns
Jack camouflages his face with clay, to hide his personality and begins to act self-indulgence
Ralph, Piggy and Simon see a ship, but they recognize the fire was going out and the chance to be rescued.
The hunters are able to kill her first pig.
Ralph make clear, that everyone must follow the rules.
Ralph and Jack has a dispute and their relationship definitely get chapped and the boys split up in two enemy camp. The competition between Jack and Ralph increase.
They dance, chant, and jab Robert with their spears, thereby they nearly kill Robert
The most boys join in Jacks tribe, because he offers them fun by killing sow and meat.
After they killed a sow the boys place the pigs headed on a stick as an offering for the beast
Jacks group assault Ralphs group and steal Piggys glasses.
Ralph, Piggy and the twins go to Jacks camp to claim Piggys glasses back. Roger roles a big rock toward Piggy, that hits him
Jacks group persecuted Ralph like an animal.
At the last passage, the hunters to set the entire island on fire. Ironically a British naval officer sees the smoke and rescue them. This passage is second way Ironically, because they arent really rescued but go from one to another war.
Thank's a lot
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig  | | Datum: | 12:48 Do 07.05.2009 | | Autor: | leduart |
Hallo
Das scheint mir von Leichtsinnsfehlern zu wimmeln.
Was passierte mit meinem Vorschlag des Grammatik und spelling checkers von etwa word?
Geh deinen Text erst noch mal durch.Satzstellung wie "to kill a pig is"
Grammatik:"the hunters to set the entire island on fire" sollte ein Hauptsatz sein
immer wieder achtest du bei Konjugationen nicht auf singular oder Plural: wie "Ralph make "
oder "Ralph and Jack has"
ich weiss, dass du das eigentlich kannst, also such solche Fehler erst selbst raus.
Wend dich an uns mit schwierigen Saetzen.
gilt auch fuer deinen anderen post.
Gruss leduart
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig | | Datum: | 10:20 So 07.06.2009 | | Autor: | matux |
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