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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 11:25 Mi 14.09.2005 | | Autor: | suzan |
Hallöchen zusammen,
Please write three sentences about British and three about the Germans on TV.
British:
1. I think the British people talk loudly.
2. I think the British talk-shows are better
3. British men in sport-studios are beatiful.
German:
1. I think the German people talk angrily.
2. I think the German talk-shows are not so good.
3. German men in sport-studios are machos.
ist das so ok?
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(Antwort) fehlerhaft  | | Datum: | 11:30 Mi 14.09.2005 | | Autor: | Britta82 |
hallo Suzan
> Hallöchen zusammen,
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> Please write three sentences about British and three about
> the Germans on TV.
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> British:
> 1. I think the British people talk loudly.
British muß unbestimmt sein, also I think British people talk loudly.
> 2. I think the British talk-shows are better.
nicht immer I think, In my opinion, In my mind British talk-shows are better than ours.
> 3. British men in sport-studios are beatiful.
meinst du die Moderatoren oder die Sportler
Entweder In my mind British anchormean in sport studios are more handsome than ours.
In my opinion British athletes are more...
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> German:
> 1. I think the German people talk angrily.
I think German people talk angrily
> 2. I think the German talk-shows are not so good.
I think German talk-shows are boring.
> 3. German men in sport-studios are machos.
German anchormen are pushy and arrogant.
Versuch etwas mehr Vielfalt in Satzanfänge zu bringen, nicht immer I think...
LG
Britta
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Hallo!
> 3. British men in sport-studios are beatiful.
Du hast "beatiful" falsch geschrieben, es heißt: beautiful. Du solltest im Übrigen mal andere Satzkonstellationen ausprobieren, ok
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