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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 18:17 Do 18.09.2008 | | Autor: | airam111 |
| Aufgabe | hey!
wir haben heute die hausaufgabe bekommen über die Dinge zu schreiben die uns glücklich machen. abgabetermin ist erst in einer woche. ich würde mich furchtbar freuen wenn jemand drüberlesen könnte und mir den text zu korrigieren.. danke schonmal !! |
What does happiness mean for me?
I think the feeling of happiness is hard to explain. Very often Im happy but I dont realize it. Im just feeling good at such a moment.
I get happier when I seize the day than when I just sit at home doing nothing. The feeling of happiness doesnt come to you. You have to let it out. There is no special plan that makes me happy.
What makes me feeling good doesnt automatically bring happiness to another person. You have to discover which things make you happy.
For me there are lots of things which make me feeling good. I love o go out, to do sports, to go shopping, to visit friends and lots of other small things. Also a delicious meal for example can make me happy. When Im with my friends we often laugh until tears are running down our faces. Sometimes we just relax and Im feeling happy too. Im not a person who cant be happy alone. Being successful brings happiness to me too but I dont think that the (einzige) way to get happy is to have (Berge) of money. Money doesnt make you happy but it makes life easier. You dont have to worry about lots of things.
I dont really think that there is a single word which exactly means happiness for me. Words which I (verbinden/assoziieren) with this special feeling are friends, family, freedom, youth, love and also money.
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Jetzt natürlich bei einer Sprache immer nur meine Meinung, die niemals objektiv ist und manchmal auch falsch :)
> hey!
>
> wir haben heute die hausaufgabe bekommen über die Dinge zu
> schreiben die uns glücklich machen. abgabetermin ist erst
> in einer woche. ich würde mich furchtbar freuen wenn jemand
> drüberlesen könnte und mir den text zu korrigieren.. danke
> schonmal !!
> What does happiness mean for me?
>
> I think the feeling of happiness is hard to explain. Very
> often Im happy but I dont realize it. Im just feeling
> good at such a moment.
in such a moment
> I get happier when I seize the day than when I just sit at
> home doing nothing.
become...obwohl get + adjective auch geht, aber da es hier ne Person ist..naja egal ^^
> The feeling of happiness doesnt come
> to you. You have to let it out.
ist schon richtig, nur von der Logik her...Dir geht es darum zu sagen, dass das Glück nicht von selbst zu einem kommt, sondern man das Glück quasi in sich selbst finden muss, richtig? Zu sagen, dass man es rauslassen muss, setzt voraus, dass man es schon hat, ich würde daher vorschlagen du formulierst es um in Richtung:
"This feeling has to arise from your inside." oder "You have to find this feeling within yourself."
> There is no special plan
> that makes me happy.
>
> What makes me feeling good doesnt automatically bring
> happiness to another person. You have to discover * which
> things make you happy.
Ich würde hier noch for "your own einfügen" als Bekräftigung :)
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> For me there are lots of things which make me feeling good.
> I love o go out, to do sports, to go shopping, to visit
> friends and lots of other small things. Also a delicious
> meal for example can make me happy. When Im with my
> friends we often laugh until tears are running down our
> faces. Sometimes we just relax and Im feeling happy too.
> Im not a person who cant be happy alone. Being successful
> brings happiness to me too but I dont think that the
> (einzige) way to get happy is to have (Berge) of money.
Vorschlag:
"...but I do not think that the only way to get happy is to have a huge amount of money."
> Money doesnt make you happy but it makes life easier. You
> dont have to worry about lots of things.
>
> I dont really think that there is a single word which
> exactly means happiness for me. Words which I
> (verbinden/assoziieren) with this special feeling are
> friends, family, freedom, youth, love and also money.
"Words (which) I connect with this special feeling..."
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig  | | Datum: | 19:10 Do 18.09.2008 | | Autor: | airam111 |
wow..
vielen, vielen dank!
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