Korrektur < Korrekturlesen < Englisch < Sprachen < Vorhilfe
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(Frage) überfällig  | | Datum: | 09:23 Mi 29.07.2009 | | Autor: | Dinker |
Hallo
Wäre dankbar um Korrektur
Because of their artificial production they are codify forever, so that they are happy with their designated work.
He is looking forward to go to the Brave new World. But this perfect World proves as a nightmare.
Because the reader has already detail information about the BNW he can anticipate that his pleasant anticipation when he gets the opportunity to go to the BNW will end in a nightmare.
The suspense increases. Die Spannung steigt...
because of his new task as John's guardian his esteem increases. (?)
Danke
gruss Dinker
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig  | | Datum: | 10:20 Do 13.08.2009 | | Autor: | matux |
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