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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 12:00 Mo 28.09.2009 | | Autor: | Dinker |
Guten Nachmittag
Ich wäre ungemein dankbar um Korrektur (Satzzeichen und Gross- Kleinschreibung müssen nicht beachtet werden)
Although greenhouse gases make up only about 1 percent of the earth’s atmosphere, they regulate our climate crucial.
Among the green house gases, that are caused through human activities are distinguished difference classes.
With 56 percent Carbon Dioxide is the main causer of Anthopogenic Greenhouse Effect. This gases is mainly build through fossil fuels.. The rainforest. deforestation influences also negative the Carbon Dioxide concentration.
The second most significant green house gase is methane, that is developed through factory farming, garbage dumps or fertilisation. There are further green house gases as Chlorofluorocarbons, ozone and nitrous oxide
You can see that the different green house gases have a life cycle between ten years until 500 years. So when we take today an action to reduce the green house gases emission the result is first in several decades visible.
Vielen Dank
Gruss Dinker
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(Antwort) fertig  | | Datum: | 23:22 Mi 07.10.2009 | | Autor: | mmhkt |
Guten Abend,
dieser Text ist der obere Teil des großen Textes, den Du im anderen Beitrag hier eingestellt hast und der mittlerweile bearbeitet worden ist.
Den unteren Teil des großen Textes hattest Du ebenfalls einzeln eingestellt.
Aus drei mach eins - hätte auch genügt.
Etwas mehr Übersicht könnte nicht schaden.
Schönen Gruß
mmhkt
> Ich wäre ungemein dankbar um Korrektur (Satzzeichen und
> Gross- Kleinschreibung müssen nicht beachtet werden)
>
> Although greenhouse gases make up only about 1 percent of
> the earth’s atmosphere, they regulate our climate
> crucial.
>
> Among the green house gases, that are caused through human
> activities are distinguished difference classes.
> With 56 percent Carbon Dioxide is the main causer of
> Anthopogenic Greenhouse Effect. This gases is mainly build
> through fossil fuels.. The rainforest. deforestation
> influences also negative the Carbon Dioxide concentration.
> The second most significant green house gase is methane,
> that is developed through factory farming, garbage dumps or
> fertilisation. There are further green house gases as
> Chlorofluorocarbons, ozone and nitrous oxide
> You can see that the different green house gases have a
> life cycle between ten years until 500 years. So when we
> take today an action to reduce the green house gases
> emission the result is first in several decades visible.
>
> Vielen Dank
> Gruss Dinker
>
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