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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 13:29 Di 15.05.2007 | | Autor: | chiqa |
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Sooo hab hier jetzt mal einen Text über meine lieblingsmedien und nicht so benutzte medien geschrieben
Könntet ihr die Grammatik nachgucken?
DANKE IM VORAUS :)
Now I'm going to write about my favourite media, which I usually use and the media, which isn't too important to survive.
My telephone is a part of my life. Life without it would be impossible. The positive effect is, that I can hear the voice
of the person, who I love. When I cannot see the person I love or a person from an other country, which is far away I
call the person and we talk to each other. If I have my bad times, I close the door and phone my best friends and cry
with them on phone and they help me and it's a good feeling to reach them 24 hours long. The only negative effect is,
that phoning can be expensive, but we have netcologne and I can talk to more than 20 countrys and it's the same like
talking to friends in Germany. Thanks to Graham Bell to inventing the phone.
The media I don't use is my CD-Player. For some people it's very important to possess(besitzen) it.
I have an own CD- Player in my room. But
the reason that I don't use it, is that I don't buy any CD's, because the music I listen to is on my computer.
Some people have a CD- addiction (sucht) and buy every week a new single. In my opinion it's too expensive and
why shall I use my CD- Player when I have my television and my computer??
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