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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 16:12 Do 13.08.2009 | | Autor: | Chari123 |
Hallo liebe Vorhilfe- Mitglieder :)
ich wäre euch sehr dankbar,wenn ihr schauen könnt, ob es irgendwas am Text zu verbessern gibt, dankeee !
Penal Laws
Definition and reason of enforcing
The Penal Laws or anti-Catholic laws (especially in 1695- 1709), were enforced, because the Irish Protestants feared Catholics might taking over the whole country. The catholic Jacob II. tried to recapture the throne of the protestant Wilhelm von Oranien, but he failed the fight at Boyne by Drogheda.
Contain
Education
- no permission neither to teach their children nor
send then abroad
Marriage
- persons of property were prohibited not to enter into
mixed marriages
Inheritance
- Catholic property was inherited equally among the
sons apart from was a Protestant, in which case he
received all
- Catholics couldn’t inherit property if there was any
Protestant heir
Property
- Catholics couldn’t posess arms or horses worth more
than £5
- Catholics couldn’t hold leases for more than 31 years,
and they couldn’t make a profit greater than a third
of their rent
Consequences
The consequences were, that the Catholics changed their names and religions and weren’t able to read or write. The priests who didn’t conform to the laws have been branded on the face or castrated. Much of Catholic church services and education were kept on secretely in the underground. Under these restrictions many able Irishmen fled the country and waited for the law declined.
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(Antwort) fertig  | | Datum: | 20:48 Fr 14.08.2009 | | Autor: | Craps |
Hallo Chari
Hier sind meine Korrekturvorschläge...
Penal Laws
Definition and reason of enforcing
The Penal Laws or anti-Catholic laws (especially in 1695- 1709)hier kein Komma were enforced, because the Irish Protestants feared that Catholics might take over the whole country. The catholic Jacob II. tried to recapture the throne of the protestant "Wilhelm von Oranien", but he failed (besser: lost) the fight at Boyne by Drogheda.
Contain
(besser: Penal Laws contain // oder: Content)
Education
- no permission to teach their children nor to
send them abroad
Marriage
- persons of property were prohibited not to enter into
mixed marriages [b]("enter" ist hier etwas unpassend, vielleicht besser: "not to marry in a mixed way" oder "not to marry between different ...")
Inheritance
- Catholic property was inherited equally among the
sons apart from was a Protestant -- das ist unverständlich, in besser: this case he
received all
- Catholics couldn’t inherit property if there was any
Protestant heir
Property
- Catholics couldn’t posess arms or horses worth more
than £5
- Catholics couldn’t hold leases for more than 31 years,
and they couldn’t make a profit greater than a third
of their rent
Consequences
The consequences wereohne Komma that the Catholics changed their names and religions and weren’t able to read or write. The priests who didn’t conform to the laws have been branded on the face or castrated. Many of the Catholic church services and also education were kept on secretely in the underground. Under these restrictions many ? Irishmen fled the country and waited for the law to be declined.
Ich hoffe, ich konnte dir ein wenig helfen.
Gruß
Craps
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(Antwort) fertig | | Datum: | 22:48 Fr 14.08.2009 | | Autor: | mmhkt |
Guten Abend,
kleine Ergänzung:
Boyne by Drogheda - das deutsche "bei" entspricht nicht dem englischen "by".
Die Schlacht fand am Boyne bei Drogheda statt.
Für "die Schlacht" passt m.E. "the battle" besser als "the fight".
Für das "bei" im Sinne von "in der Nähe" gibt es andere Begriffe.
Selbst suchen macht schlau... 
Ein klassisches Wörterbuch oder Seiten wie z.B. leo.org und dict.cc werden dir da weiterhelfen.
> The catholic Jacob II. tried to recapture the throne of the protestant
> Wilhelm von Oranien, but he failed the fight at Boyne by
> Drogheda.
Schönen Gruß
mmhkt
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