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(Frage) überfällig  | | Datum: | 11:50 Mo 04.05.2009 | | Autor: | Dinker |
Hallo ich wäre sehr dankbar um Korrektur
The mass media would also be an example for todays brainwashing and hypnopaedia technique. When we a TV programme we are frequently interrupted by/with commercial, that play time after time the same message, with the psychological aid that we save this message in our subconscious. In my opinion this is a form of sleep-teaching. But there are a lot of other examples. If a teacher tells you all the time you are very bad and a hopeful case? You begin to accept and even espouse it yourself
Danke
Gruss DInker
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(Antwort) fertig  | | Datum: | 12:57 Mo 04.05.2009 | | Autor: | mmhkt |
Grüezi,
hier einige Anmerkungen und Vorschläge:
> The mass media would also be an example for todays
> brainwashing and hypnopaedia technique. (warum "would"? - entweder "könnten" oder "sind") When we watch a TV
> programme we are frequently interrupted by commercials,
> that play time after time the same message, with the
> psychological aid (psychologische Hilfe? - vielleicht eher "Effekt") that we save this message in our
> subconscious. In my opinion this is a form of
> sleep-teaching. But there are a lot of other examples. If a
> teacher tells you all the time that you are very bad and a
> hopeful case? ("ein hoffnungsvoller Fall"? - meinst Du vielleicht eher "ein hoffnungsloser Fall"?) you begin to accept and even espouse it
> yourself
>
Soweit fürs erste - ohne Anspruch auf Vollständigkeit.
Schönen Gruß
mmhkt
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig  | | Datum: | 12:20 Do 04.06.2009 | | Autor: | matux |
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