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(Frage) überfällig  | | Datum: | 21:19 Do 19.03.2009 | | Autor: | cheezy |
| Aufgabe | Woman wins lottery for tenth time
For a long time a witch lived in a mansion in London. She was very lonely, because she had conjured all the time, and she was very busy. In her room was many vast numbers of books about magic. She was able to conjure everything what she want. For example she was able to do conjuring tricks on lottery and if she had gone on the street she had known all the secrets of the people. Sometimes few people had just come to her, because they wanted that she perform magic, that they will be rich.
That was no problem for her, so she had won every month the lottery and gave the money to the people. The people was very extraordinarily lucky and they was very convinced about the skills from the witch. As time drew on the people lived very painless and happy. After many years the customers from the witch had died in an accident.Magic is very dangerous because at the beginning you have a lucky live and as time drew on awful things could happen in your life.
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Hi Liebes Forum
Diese Geschichte musste ich in Mitvergangenheit und Vergangenheit schreiben.
Kann mir bitte jemand auf Fehler und Zeiten überprüfen grammatik usw.
rechtschreibung hab ich eh alleine geschaut
danke
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig  | | Datum: | 01:20 Fr 20.03.2009 | | Autor: | matux |
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