Zeitenkorrektur < Korrekturlesen < Englisch < Sprachen < Vorhilfe
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Hallo liebe Forumfreunde,habe einen text geschrieben,bin mir aber ziemlich unsicher ob er fehlerfrei ist,vor allem in den Zeiten habe ich große Mängel,deshalb bitte ich euch um eure Hilfe.
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It was raining when we have arrived at the coast but my midday it had been stopping.We thought the rain lasted all day and we have been very glad it hadn´t because we were wanting to go swimming.We found a cafe where we could eat outside and were havinhg a nice meal. By the time we had finished lunch the sun shone brightly and the temperature rose to 30 degrees. We were all running down to the beach and , after we wre changing into our swimming things,we dived in the sea.
Würd mich über jede Hilfe freuen.
Vielen Dank im Voraus.
MfG
Hasan
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Hallo.
It was raining while we arrived at the coast and midday passed already. We thought that the rain would last all day long but we were very glad when we recognized it didn't because we wanted to go swimming. [But at first] we went to a cafe where we were eating outside and having a nice meal. By the time we had finished our lunch the sun was shining brightly and the temperatures were risen to [about] 30 degree [centigrade]. Altogether we runned down to the beach and dived into the water after bandying our clothes.
Es sind bestimmt auch noch ein paar Fehlerchen drin, aber allzu viele dürften es nicht mehr sein. ;)
Gruß
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