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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 16:53 Mi 27.11.2013 | | Autor: | Dom_89 |
Hallo,
ich sollte eine Zusammenfassung eines deutschen Textes in Englisch verfassen; könnt ihr diesen einmal lesen und auch Verbesserungsvorschläge machen ?! :)
In the Text "Niedrige Miete und Nähe zur Hochschule" written by an author from the newspaper "WZ" in November 2012 the rader get to know some interesting facts about halls of residence. In a survey the "Hochschul Informations System" find out that a hall of residence have a bad image in germany. For example 24% evaluate a hall of residence bad, but also 31% good. Many people like to live in a student accomudation. Also many people like to live in a rented apartment, but a lot of students live in a student accomudation,because they have there to pay less rent. Many former students criticize a hall of residence; the rooms are too small and unclean. The same things said people who were only to visit a friend.
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(Antwort) fertig  | | Datum: | 00:36 Do 28.11.2013 | | Autor: | moody |
Hallo,
> In the Text "Niedrige Miete und Nähe zur Hochschule"
> written by an author from the newspaper "WZ" in November
> 2012 the rader get to know some interesting facts about
gets to know
> halls of residence. In a survey the "Hochschul Informations
> System" find out that a hall of residence have a bad image
finds ... havehas
> in germany. For example 24% evaluate a hall of residence
> bad, but also 31% good. Many people like to live in a
Mmh ich würde das etwas umschreiben, statt "but also" vielleicht eher was in Richtung "but on the other hand 31% rate it good.
Und du solltest vielleicht noch schreiben 24% von was? 24% der Befragten? Der Studenten?
> student accomudation. Also many people like to live in a
> rented apartment, but a lot of students live in a student
> accomudation,because they have there to pay less rent. Many
stell das there ans Ende
> former students criticize a hall of residence; the rooms
> are too small and unclean. The same things said people who
> were only to visit a friend.
Glaube not clean wäre besser. Und zum letzten Satz: who only went there to visit a friend.
1) Statt a hallway residence, verwende einfach den Plural, es geht ja um Wohnheime im Allgemeinen. Das ist zu deutsch übersetzt ;)
Studenten leben gerne in einem Wohnheim, geht bei uns so, im englischen ist es besser zu sagen students like to live in hallway residences
2) Ganz wichtig: He, she, it - das s muss mit! Das musst du dir unbedingt merken :)
Ansonsten ![[ok]](/images/smileys/ok.gif "[ok]")
lg moody
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