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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 14:11 Mo 15.06.2009 | | Autor: | WMC |
| Aufgabe | | brauche hilfe beim englisch vortrag da ich nicht sehr gut bin im englisch |
English Vortrag Eishockey
Ich möchte Sie heute recht herzlich zu meinem Vortrag über das Thema Eishockey begrüssen. Ich spiele selber Eishockey und deshalb wird sich mein Vortrag um mich und das Eishockey drehen. Zuerst werde ich über meine Karriere sprechen, danach werde ich etwas über die Mannschaft erzählen wo ich zur Zeit spiele und zum Schluss werde ich erklären was es alles braucht um Eishockey spielen zu können.
Ich fing 1994 an Eishockey beim zu spielen. Zuerst war ich ein halbes Jahr in der Eishockeyschule des EHC Biel und wurde nach einem kleinen Test () in die Juniorenabteilung aufgenommen. Ich spielte 7 Jahre bei Biel und durchlief dort die junioren Mannschaften Picoolo, Moskito, Mini und Novizen. Ich wechselte danach zum SC Lyss, weil ich in Biel nicht mehr spielen konnte. Das Problem war das wir zu viele Spieler für eine Mannschaft waren aber zu wenig Leute für 2 Teams so entschied ich mich nach Lyss zu wechseln. Dort spielte ich noch 3 Jahre lang in der Junioren Abteilung. 2005 wechselte ich dann zur Amateur Mannschaft des SClyss2. In dieser Saison stiegen wir dann auch von 4 Liga in die 3 Liga auf.
In der Saison 2007 konnte ich das erste mal nach 13 Jahren eine Saison nicht bestreiten weil ich meine Fussbänder am rechten Fuss gerissen hatte, so musste ich mich in der Klinik Linde operieren lassen. Dennoch muss ich sagen das Eishockey kein gefährlicher Sport ist. Es gibt war immer wieder Unfälle wie zuletzt mit Julien Sprunger an der WM oder in Moutier wo ein spieler gelämmt wurde, aber das sind seltene Ausnahmen.Letzte Saison 2008/2009 haben wir auf dem 3 Schlussrang abgeschlossen. Nach einem guten Saison Start führten wir bis Weinachten die Tabelle an. Im neuen Jahr haben wir dann halt ein paar mal verloren. Im Winter trainieren wir 2 mal in der Woche auf dem Eis in Lyss in der Seelandhalle. Wir trainieren immer am Montag und am Donnerstag von 20.45- 22.00. Zurzeit haben einmal in der Woche Sommertraining. Dort machen wir einige Kraftübung und spielen Unihockey oder Fussball. Unser Team besteht aus ca 15. Feldspielern und 2 Goalies. Ich selber bin Verteidiger habe aber früher als Stürmer gespielt. Unsere Teamstimmung war letzte Saison sehr gut und ich hoffe, dass dies so bleibt.
Eishockey ist ein sehr teurer Sport. Da man den Sport auf dem Eis ausüben muss kostet der Mitglieder Beitrag pro Saison in Lyss 500.- CHF. Dazu muss man noch einen Sponsoren lauf absolvieren bei dem Man nochmals 300.-CHF bezahlen muss. Die Ausrüstung kostet aber auch sehr viel. So kosten zum Beispiel meine Schlittschuhe 500.- diese sind extra verstärkt wen einem der Puck trifft und auch für die schnellen Bewegungen. Diese Schlittschuhe hier sind sehr neu die habe ich letzte Saison gekauft. Meine alten Schlittschuhe waren ca 5 Jahre alt. Profis haben natürlich noch bessere Schlittschuhe diese kosten dann ca 1000.CHf. Der Stock damit man überhaupt spielen kann ist auch sehr teuer und kosten um die 300chf. Es gibt natürlich auch Stöcke für 600.chf.Pro Saison brauche ich ca. 2 Stöcke. Ich spielte eigentlich immer gerne mit Holzstöcken aber diese findet man heute fast nicht mehr. Weiter teuer sind die Hosen und auch die Handschuhe die beide um die 300 fr kosten. Der Panzer kostet dann nochmals 200chf. Helm, Beinschoner
Ich spielte jetzt seit rund 15 Jahren Eishockey und ich finde diesen Sport immer noch sehr faszinierend. Es ist eine Mischung aus Körperspiel, gute übersicht und Geschicklichkeit. Im Eishockey wechselt das Spiel rund alle 15 Sekunden die Richtung dies und auch der Körperkontakt macht für mich dieses Spiel so interessant.
Ich möchte mich für Ihr zuhören bedanken und sie können nun wenn sie wollen fragen stellen.
I am glad to be here today and I would you greed. I will have my speech about the ice hockey. I play self ice hockey therefore the short speech turn about me and my hobby. First I would like to talk about my carer then I would say somethings about my team were I play now and finally I tell you witch material we use for play hockey. At the end of my speech you can ask all you question that you wants.
I began to play ice hockey in the 1994. First I play a half year in the hockey school from the Eishockey Club Biel and then after a little test I affiliate in the club. I played 7 year in Biel and has there played in the different ages classes then I chanced to the SC Lyss. Because I didnt could play in Biel. The problem was we had too many players for one team and to less for two teams. So I couldnt play there and I make the decision to chance the club. There I play again 3 year in the junior section and in 2005 I chance to the amateur team lyss2. In the season 2005 we win the champion ship and promoted in the 3 league. In the year 2007 could first time after 13 year play ice hockey. I had arch my ligament in the right foot and I must operate my feet because it s hurt very well on the ice. However I think hockey is not a dangerous sport. Of course there are happen accidents like on the world champion ship in Bern. Where Julien Sprunger bruises his back or like the player in Moutier where is paralysed. But I think every sport is danger. No the all the live is danger.
Last season had we ended on the 3 place in the ranking. It was my first season after the operation and it was pretty cool I had very miss the feeling on the ice. We had beginning the season good. Until Christmas we lead the champion chip but in the new year we lost a few games. Even to the last of the chart. We played nearly 13 games for season. In the winter we train in the Lyss ones at week. On Monday from 20.45 till 22.00. Now we have summer training in school gym. There we played floorball or made do some exercises. We do that one s at week and this will during till end of august. Our team counting 15 players and 2 goalies. Myself I am a defender but long time ago I was an offense player. Last year the atmosphere in the team was very good and I hope this even still this year.
Ice hockey is a very expensive sport. You online can play this sport in a hockey arena. An hour on the ice cost 130. - CHF in Lyss. So the membership contribution cost 500. Franks and we must make a Sponsor run. We are running 10 minutes in a circle on the ice. Other people counting how much round we ran. Previously we had must search sponsor and they pay for every completed run a value. The minimum amount is 300. Franks. So when we didnt found enough Sponsor we must pay the bill self. The hockey equipment is too expensive. But most of the object can you a long time. Here are my skates they cost 500.- CHF. They are reinforced on the side and on the front. Thats is imported for make small turns or if a puck hit the skate. So you didnt can break you foot. The sticks are too expensive one stick cost 300 Franks. I used 2 ore 3 sticks per season. In addition the trouser cost 250 Franks. For my gloves I have paid 210 Franks. Thats here are the knee protector they cost 200.Franks. Then we have elbow protection and the chest protector. They charge as well 200.Franks. And dont forget the helm. They charge too 250 Franks. Juniors just 18 years must wear a grill or a Plexiglas panel.
I have played since 15 years ice hockey and I find this sport very fascination. The game is a mix of body play, good overview and ability. The statistic said that the game changed all 15 seconds the playing field side. That and the body play made for my this sport so interesting.
I am now at the end of my lecture and they can put their questions
Ich habe diese Frage auch in folgenden Foren auf anderen Internetseiten gestellt:http://de.answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20090615045343AAVtJF0
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(Antwort) fertig  | | Datum: | 16:36 Mo 15.06.2009 | | Autor: | leduart |
Hallo
alles zu korrigieren ist mir zu lang. also erstmal den Anfang und die Schlimmsten Fehler.
Verbesserungen in den Zeilen ohne > falsches eingeklammert.
I am glad to be here today and (I would you gree) and I welcome you to my talk. I will
( have my speech about the)talk ice hockey. I play (self) ice hockey myself
> therefore the short lecture is about me and my hobby(speech turn about me and my hobby.)
> First I would like to talk about my carer then I would say
somethings about (my)the team were I play now and finally I
tell you witch material we use for (play) playing hockey. At the end
of my speech you can ask all the questions that you want.
>
I began to play ice hockey in (the) 1994. First I (play) played (a) half a
year in the hockey school (from) of the Eishockey Club Biel and
> then after a little test (I affiliate in the club) I became a member. I played
7 (year)years in Biel and (has there) have played there in the different age(s)
classes.
Then I (chanced) changed to the SC Lyss. Because (I didnt
could) could not play in Biel. The problem was we had too many players
for one team and (to less) to few for two teams. So I couldnt play
there and I make the decision to (chance)change the club. There I
(play) played again 3 years in the junior section and in 2005 I
(chance) changed to the amateur team lyss2. In the season 2005 we (win) won
the champion ship and were promoted to the 3 league. In the year
2007 (could) it was the first time I could not play ice hockey after 13 year . (I had
arch my) The ligament in (the) my right foot was ruptured and I (must_ had to be operated on my
feet because it (s) hurt very (well) much on the ice. However I
> think hockey is not a dangerous sport.
Of course there (are )
happen accidents like on the world champion ship in Bern.
Where Julien Sprunger (bruises)bruised his back or like the player
in Moutier where a player was paralysed. But I think every sport is
(danger) dangereous.( No the all the live is danger. ) But serious injuries are very rare.
>
Last season (had) we ended on the 3 place in the ranking. It
> was my first season after the operation and it was pretty
cool. I had very (miss) much missed the feeling on the ice. We had a good
beginning of the season (good). Until Christmas we lead the
> champion chip but in the new year we lost a few games. Even
> to the last of the chart. We played (nearly) [man kann doch nicht beinahe 13 Spiele spielen?] 13 games for
the season. In the winter we train in the Lyss (ones at)once a week.
> On Monday from 20.45 till 22.00. Now we have summer
training in a school gym. There we play(ed) floorball or (made
do) have some exercises. We do that (one s at) once a week .(and this will
during) till end of august. Our team (counting) has 15 players and
2 goalies. (Myself) I am a defender but for long time before I was
> an offense player. Last year the atmosphere in the team was
> very good and I hope this (even still) will be the same this year.
>
Ice hockey is a very expensive sport. You (online) can only play
> this sport in a hockey arena. An hour on the ice (cost ) costs 130.
> - CHF in Lyss. So the membership contribution (cost) is 500.
> Franks and we must make a Sponsor run. We are running 10
minutes in a circle on the ice. Other people are counting how
( much) many rounds we ran. (Previously we had must) first we had to find (search) sponsors, who
(and they) pay for every completed run a certain amount (value). The minimum
amount is 300. Franks. So when we didnt (found) find enough
Sponsor we must pay the bill (self) ourself. The hockey equipment is
( too) very expensive. But most of the object (can you a ) one can use for a long time.
> Here are my skates they cost 500.- CHF. They are reinforced
on the side and on the front. Thats is (imported for) important to make
small turns or if a puck hits the skate. So you (didnt)dont (can )
> break you foot. The sticks are (too) also expensive one stick cost
> 300 Franks. I used 2 ore 3 sticks per season. In addition
the trousers cost 250 Franks. For my gloves I have paid 210
Franks. (Thats) these here are the knee protectors they cost
> 200.Franks. Then we have elbow protection and the chest
> protector. They charge as well 200.Franks. And dont forget
> the helm. They charge (too) about 250 Franks. Juniors just 18 years
> must wear a grill or a Plexiglas panel.
>
> I have played ice hockey since 15 years and I find this
sport very (fascination) fascinating. The game is a mix of body play,
> good overview and ability. The statistic said that the game
(changed) changes every 15 seconds the side of the playing field . That and the
body play made (for my) this sport so interesting for me.
>
I am now at the end of my lecture . Now you can pose all your questions.
Kritik: ich erfahr gar nichts ueber das eigentliche Spiel, Regeln, wasmuss man koennen, was ist schwer daran, wie gut muss man schlittschuh laufen (etwa verglichen mit nem Renn oder Kunstlaeufer usw.
and they can put their
> questions
Gruss leduart
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